great story, Chris. i love the imagery of the multiple Angelas hanging around each other. very assured prose, too. was a little short for my taste but perfect for online reading. congrats!
Beautiful story. I love this line the most, "She has vague memories--memories left over from the Angela in bed--of sex being incredible, spicy and full of musk and time stretching out like taffy" Absolutely gorgeous imagery. You write how I wish I could :)
Hey thanks, guys. But Jessic, from what I've read on your blog, you're a really good writer! Very poetic and lyrical. I've no doubt we'll be seeing your stories in print one day.
Excellent story, dood. I like the clipped, detached style you used here. Very hip.
This story is a perfect example of slipstream. The multiple Angelas can be seen as a fantastic element, but they're never explained, so their presence is just...bizarre. Plus, this was published in a "mainstream" journal.
On another note: Pindeldyboz has some of the funniest submission guidelines I've ever seen. I sent them a story just because of that.
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great story, Chris. i love the imagery of the multiple Angelas hanging around each other. very assured prose, too. was a little short for my taste but perfect for online reading. congrats!
Beautiful story. I love this line the most, "She has vague memories--memories left over from the Angela in bed--of sex being incredible, spicy and full of musk and time stretching out like taffy" Absolutely gorgeous imagery. You write how I wish I could :)
Hey thanks, guys. But Jessic, from what I've read on your blog, you're a really good writer! Very poetic and lyrical. I've no doubt we'll be seeing your stories in print one day.
Thank you!
Excellent story, dood. I like the clipped, detached style you used here. Very hip.
This story is a perfect example of slipstream. The multiple Angelas can be seen as a fantastic element, but they're never explained, so their presence is just...bizarre. Plus, this was published in a "mainstream" journal.
On another note: Pindeldyboz has some of the funniest submission guidelines I've ever seen. I sent them a story just because of that.
Hey thanks, Jason. Yeah, Pindeldyboz has a good sense of humor. It's one of the things I like about them most.
Nice hot massuer sex story!
LOL, you anonymous posters (probably Bowes again) have got to start leaving id tags. Weirdos. ;-)
Nah, it wasn't me. It didn't think the sex was all that hot.
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